A tone of voice guide made of adjectives cannot be applied, and cannot be checked. Confident, human, bold, approachable: every company in your category has claimed all four, and no writer facing a blank page has ever been helped by them.

What can be applied is a set of decisions about specific mechanics, and what can be checked is whether the reader understood. Both of those exist in published form, written by an institution with no interest in brand strategy: the US federal government, which was required by statute to write clearly and produced guidance on how.

That guidance is worth reading precisely because it is not marketing advice. It names techniques, refuses to name a score, and tells you to test instead.

The statutory definition, and what it deliberately omits

The 2010 statute requiring federal agencies to write plainly is a useful starting point, mostly for what it does not contain.

The purpose, in the law’s own words. To improve accountability “by promoting clear Government communication that the public can understand and use.”

And the definition of the thing itself. Plain writing means “writing that is clear, concise, well-organized, and follows other best practices appropriate to the subject or field and intended audience.”

Notice what is absent. No reading level. No sentence length. No word count. No readability score. The standard is entirely functional and audience-relative, which is inconvenient for anyone who wanted a number to put in a brand guideline.

Two boundaries worth stating honestly. The Act binds federal agencies, not companies, and it explicitly excludes regulations from its scope. Nothing here is a legal obligation on your marketing. It is the most rigorously developed public guidance available, which is a different and still useful thing.

One practical note. The guidance formerly published at its own domain now redirects to a general government digital guides site. If your brand guidelines cite the old URL, the link works but the destination has changed.

The statutory definition of plain writing and the criteria it deliberately omitsThe statutory definition of plain writing enacted in 2010, and the criteria that definition deliberately omits, together with the boundaries of its application. The statute states its purpose as improving the effectiveness and accountability of federal agencies to the public by promoting clear government communication that the public can understand and use. It defines plain writing as writing that is clear, concise, well organized, and follows other best practices appropriate to the subject or field and intended audience. What the definition contains is therefore entirely functional and relative to the audience addressed. What it omits is equally significant, since it specifies no reading level, no readability formula, no sentence length, no word count and no numeric threshold of any kind, which is inconvenient for anybody seeking a figure to insert into a set of brand guidelines but which is a deliberate feature rather than an oversight, because the adequacy of writing can only be judged against the audience receiving it. Two boundaries should be stated honestly when citing this material in a commercial context. The statute binds federal agencies rather than companies, so nothing in it constitutes a legal obligation on marketing communication. The statute additionally excludes regulations from the scope of documents it covers. What the material offers instead is the most rigorously developed body of public guidance available on writing that people can understand and act upon, which is a different and still useful proposition. One practical note is that the guidance formerly published at its own dedicated domain now redirects to a general government digital guides site, so brand guidelines citing the former address will resolve but will reach reorganised content.The definition, and the hole in itWhat the statute says plain writing is”Writing that is clear, concise, well-organized, and follows other best practices appropriate tothe subject or field and intended audience.”What it does not sayNo reading levelNo readability formulaNo sentence length or word countTwo honest boundariesIt binds federal agencies, not companiesIt excludes regulations from its own scopeSo: guidance, not obligation.The absence is the pointThe standard is functional and audience-relative because writing can only be judged against the peoplereading it. Anyone offering you a target score is offering something no institution endorses.
An entirely functional definition. The absence of any number is the point, not an oversight. Source : Plain Writing Act of 2010, Public Law 111-274 (2010)

The techniques, named and ranked

Where the statute is abstract, the accompanying guidelines are specific, and twice they say which change matters most.

On voice, with an unusually strong claim. “Passive voice obscures who is responsible for what and is one of the biggest problems with government documents.” And then: “More than any other writing technique, using active voice and specifying who is performing an action will change the character of your writing.”

On sentence length, with a rule rather than a target. “Express only one idea in each sentence.” The reasoning: “Sentences loaded with dependent clauses and exceptions confuse the audience by losing the main point in a forest of words.” And the summary line: “Complexity is the greatest enemy of clear communication.”

On vocabulary, borrowing a century-old formulation. “Prefer the familiar word to the far-fetched. Prefer the concrete word to the abstraction. Prefer the single word to the circumlocution. Prefer the short word to the long.”

On pronouns, with the second superlative claim. “More than any other single technique, using ‘you’ pulls users into your document and makes it relevant to them. When you use ‘you’ to address users, they are more likely to understand what their responsibility is.”

With a caveat most brand guides skip. “Be sure to define ‘you’ clearly.” In B2B, where a page may be read by a user, a buyer and a procurement officer, an undefined “you” produces text that addresses nobody.

And a structural instruction that changes more than it looks. “Address one person, not a group.” It is the difference between writing for a market and writing to a reader.

The writing techniques named in the federal plain language guidelines and their stated relative importanceThe specific writing techniques named in the federal plain language guidelines, presented as mechanics rather than as descriptive attributes, together with the two techniques the guidelines explicitly identify as carrying the greatest effect. On voice, the guidelines state that active voice makes it clear who is supposed to do what and eliminates ambiguity about responsibilities, that passive voice obscures who is responsible for what and is one of the biggest problems with government documents, and that more than any other writing technique, using active voice and specifying who is performing an action will change the character of the writing. On sentence construction, the guidelines instruct that each sentence should express only one idea, observing that long complicated sentences often indicate that the writer is unsure what they want to say, that shorter sentences are better for conveying complex information because they break it into smaller units that are easier to process, that sentences loaded with dependent clauses and exceptions confuse the audience by losing the main point in a forest of words, and that complexity is the greatest enemy of clear communication. On vocabulary, the guidelines instruct the use of short simple words and reproduce a set of preferences, namely preferring the familiar word to the far fetched, the concrete word to the abstraction, the single word to the circumlocution, and the short word to the long. On pronouns, the guidelines state that pronouns help the audience picture themselves in the text, that more than any other single technique using the second person pulls users into a document and makes it relevant to them, that addressing users in the second person makes them more likely to understand what their responsibility is, that using the first person plural for the organization makes it more approachable and shortens sentences, and that the second person must be clearly defined. A further structural instruction is to address one person rather than a group.Four techniques, two of them ranked firstActive voice, and name who acts”Passive voice obscures who is responsible for what and is one of the biggest problems with government documents.""More than any other writing technique … will change the character of your writing.”Say “you”, and define who “you” is”When you use ‘you’ to address users, they are more likely to understand what their responsibility is.""More than any other single technique, using ‘you’ pulls users into your document.”One idea per sentenceNot a word count. A rule about content.”Complexity is the greatest enemy.”Prefer the plain word”The familiar word to the far-fetched …the single word to the circumlocution.”And one structural instruction: “Address one person, not a group.” Writing to a reader, not to a market.In B2B an undefined “you” addresses the user, the buyer and procurement at once, which means nobody.
Specific mechanics rather than adjectives. Two of them carry an explicit claim to be the highest-leverage change available. Source : Federal Plain Language Guidelines, March 2011, revision 1 (2011)

No score, and three ways to test instead

The most useful thing in the guidance is a refusal. Nowhere does it set a readability target, and it says what to do in place of one.

There is no prescribed grade level. Across the full document, no reading level and no readability formula is set as an objective. The standard remains “appropriate to the subject or field and intended audience.”

And the consumer protection regulator says the same thing in its own domain. “There is no set formula for a clear and conspicuous disclosure; it depends on the information that must be provided and the nature of the advertisement.”

What the guidance recommends instead is testing, in three named forms. Paraphrase testing, usability testing, and controlled comparative studies, the last defined as: “Collect quantitative data on how well the general public uses your final document.”

Paraphrase testing is the one worth stealing. Give someone the paragraph, ask them to say back what it means in their own words, and listen for the part they cannot restate. It requires no tooling, five people, and half an hour.

Which reframes what a voice guide should contain. Not a target score, which no institution endorses, but a test the team can actually run before publishing.

One piece of context for why this matters in the US market. National assessment data records 28 percent of US adults performing at the lowest literacy level in 2023, up from 19 percent in 2017, with 44 percent at level 3 or above. Whatever your audience, writing that only works for confident readers is writing that works for fewer people than it did a few years ago.

Absence of a prescribed readability score and the three testing methods recommended insteadThe absence of any prescribed readability score in official guidance on clear writing, and the three empirical testing methods recommended in its place. Neither the federal plain writing statute nor its accompanying guidelines set a reading level, a readability formula, a sentence length target or a word count as an objective, with the statute defining plain writing only as clear, concise, well organized and following best practices appropriate to the subject or field and intended audience. The consumer protection regulator states the equivalent position in its own domain, namely that there is no set formula for a clear and conspicuous disclosure since it depends on the information that must be provided and the nature of the advertisement. In place of a score, the federal guidelines recommend three methods of empirical testing. The first is paraphrase testing, in which a reader is given a passage and asked to restate its meaning in their own words, so that comprehension failures surface as the parts the reader cannot restate, a method requiring no tooling, a small number of participants and a short session. The second is usability testing, observing people attempting to accomplish a task using the document. The third is controlled comparative studies, defined as collecting quantitative data on how well the general public uses the final document, which permits two versions to be compared on outcome rather than on preference. Contextual data from the national assessment of adult competencies records twenty eight percent of United States adults performing at the lowest literacy level in 2023, an increase from nineteen percent in 2017, with forty four percent performing at level three or above, and with overall average scores decreasing between the two assessments, which means writing calibrated only for confident readers reaches a smaller proportion of the adult population than it did previously.No score exists. Test instead.What no official source providesA reading level, a readability formula, a sentence length, a word count. “There is no set formula.”Paraphrase testingAsk a reader to say thepassage back in their words.Five people, half an hour.Usability testingWatch someone try to dothe task with the document.Where they stop is the answer.Controlled comparison”Collect quantitative data onhow well the general publicuses your final document.”The context, for a US audience28 percent of US adults were at the lowest literacy level in 2023, up from 19 percent in 2017. 44 percent at level 3 or above.A voice guide should contain a test the team can run, not a score no institution endorses.
Neither the plain language guidance nor the advertising regulator sets a formula. Both point at testing with real readers. Source : Federal Plain Language Guidelines, and FTC .com Disclosures, 2013 (2013)

Where tone stops being a preference

There is one place in your writing where clarity is a regulated requirement rather than a brand choice, and the regulation is unusually specific about it.

The definition, from the rule itself. “‘Clear and conspicuous’ means that a disclosure is difficult to miss (i.e., easily noticeable) and easily understandable by ordinary consumers.”

With a channel-matching requirement. If the claim is made visually, the disclosure must appear “in at least the communication’s visual portion”; if audibly, in the audible portion; if both, in both. And “a disclosure presented simultaneously in both the visual and audible portions … is more likely to be clear and conspicuous.”

And a hard rule for anything interactive. “In any communication using an interactive electronic medium, such as social media or the internet, the disclosure should be unavoidable.”

The definition also redefines your audience for you. “When an endorsement targets a specific audience, such as older adults, ‘ordinary consumers’ includes members of that group.” Your reading of what is obvious is not the standard; theirs is.

The evaluation factors are published. Proximity to the claim, prominence, whether it is unavoidable, whether other elements distract from it, whether it needs repeating, adequate duration and cadence, and “whether the language of the disclosure is understandable to the intended audience.”

With a self-correcting instruction attached. “If there are indications that a significant proportion of reasonable consumers are not noticing or comprehending a necessary disclosure, the disclosure should be improved.”

And on vocabulary, guidance that reads like a tone of voice rule. Use “simple and clear language”. Do not “use vague or confusing terms like ‘sp,’ ‘spon,’ or ‘collab,’ or stand-alone terms like ‘thanks’ or ‘ambassador.’” Placement matters too: disclosures “are likely to be missed if they appear only on an ABOUT ME or profile page, at the end of posts or videos, or anywhere that requires a person to click MORE.”

Regulatory requirements that convert writing clarity from a preference into an obligationThe circumstances in which the clarity of a company’s writing ceases to be a matter of brand preference and becomes a regulatory requirement, together with the published definition and evaluation factors. The regulation defines clear and conspicuous to mean that a disclosure is difficult to miss, that is easily noticeable, and easily understandable by ordinary consumers. It requires channel matching, so that where the representation necessitating a disclosure is made visually the disclosure should appear in at least the visual portion of the communication, where made audibly in at least the audible portion, and where made through both means in both portions, adding that a disclosure presented simultaneously in both portions is more likely to be clear and conspicuous. It requires that a visual disclosure, by its size, contrast, location, the length of time it appears and other characteristics, should stand out from accompanying text or other visual elements so that it is easily noticed, read and understood. It requires that in any communication using an interactive electronic medium such as social media or the internet, the disclosure should be unavoidable, and that the disclosure not be contradicted or mitigated by, or inconsistent with, anything else in the communication. It redefines the audience standard, stating that where an endorsement targets a specific audience such as older adults, the term ordinary consumers includes members of that group. The associated guidance lists seven evaluation factors, namely the placement of the disclosure and its proximity to the claim it qualifies, its prominence, whether it is unavoidable, the extent to which other elements might distract attention from it, whether it needs repeating in order to be effectively communicated, whether audio disclosures have adequate volume and cadence and visual disclosures adequate duration, and whether the language of the disclosure is understandable to the intended audience, while stating that there is no set formula. It further instructs that if there are indications that a significant proportion of reasonable consumers are not noticing or comprehending a necessary disclosure, the disclosure should be improved.The one place clarity is not optionalThe definition, from the rule”Difficult to miss (i.e., easily noticeable) and easily understandable by ordinary consumers.”The seven published evaluation factors1. Proximity to the claim it qualifies5. Whether it needs repeating2. Prominence6. Adequate duration, volume and cadence3. Whether it is unavoidable7. Understandable to the intended audience4. Whether other elements distract from itYour judgement is not the standard”When an endorsement targets a specificaudience … ‘ordinary consumers’ includesAnd it self-correctsIf consumers are not noticing orcomprehending it, “the disclosure should”members of that group.” … “be improved.” Both clauses put the burden on the reader’s comprehension, not yours.In interactive media the disclosure “should be unavoidable”. Not present. Unavoidable.
Seven published evaluation factors, and a definition that lets your audience decide what counts as understandable. Source : 16 CFR 255.0(f), FTC Endorsement Guides, and .com Disclosures (2023)

What a usable voice guide contains

Replace the adjectives with decisions somebody can apply at eleven at night without asking anyone.

Person and address. Who is “you”, named explicitly, and whether the company is “we” or its own name. Then hold it everywhere, including error messages and invoices.

Voice and tense. Active by default, with the actor named. Present tense unless the past is the point.

The sentence rule. One idea per sentence. Not a word limit, which produces choppy text, but a content limit, which produces clear text.

A word list with replacements, not prohibitions. Twenty terms your industry overuses, each with the plain alternative next to it. A list that only forbids is a list that gets ignored, because the writer still has to fill the gap.

The named moments where tone is decided. Pricing, an outage, a rejection, a renewal, a mistake you made. These are where a voice either exists or does not, and they are exactly the passages that never appear in the guide.

A worked example per moment. One paragraph written the wrong way and the same paragraph written the right way. Two examples teach more than two pages of principles.

And the test. Name paraphrase testing as the acceptance step for anything customer-facing, with five readers. A guide that ends with a check gets applied. A guide that ends with aspirations gets filed.

Components of an applicable brand tone of voice guide replacing descriptive adjectivesThe components of a brand tone of voice guide that can actually be applied by a writer without interpretation, replacing the descriptive adjectives that constitute most such guides. The first component is person and address, specifying explicitly who the second person refers to and whether the organization refers to itself in the first person plural or by its own name, held consistently across all surfaces including error messages and invoices. The second is voice and tense, defaulting to the active voice with the actor named and to the present tense unless the past is the substantive point. The third is the sentence rule, being one idea per sentence, which is a limit on content rather than a limit on word count, since a word limit produces choppy text whereas a content limit produces clear text. The fourth is a vocabulary list pairing terms the industry overuses with their plain alternatives, rather than a list of prohibitions, on the reasoning that a list which only forbids is ignored because the writer still has to fill the resulting gap. The fifth is identification of the moments in which tone is actually decided, namely pricing, an outage, a rejection, a renewal and an admission of error, which are precisely the passages omitted from most guides. The sixth is a worked example for each such moment, presenting one paragraph written poorly alongside the same paragraph written well, on the basis that two contrasting examples teach more than two pages of principles. The seventh is an acceptance test, specifically naming paraphrase testing with approximately five readers as the check applied to anything customer facing before publication, on the reasoning that a guide ending in a check is applied whereas a guide ending in aspirations is filed away.From adjectives to decisions1. Person and addressWho is “you”. Are we “we” or the company name.2. Voice and tenseActive, actor named. Present unless the past matters.3. One idea per sentenceA content limit, not a word limit.4. Word list with replacementsTwenty overused terms, each with its plain alternative.5. The moments where tone is actually decidedPricing. An outage. A rejection. A renewal. A mistake you made.These are the passages that never appear in a voice guide, and the only ones where voice is visible.6. A worked example per momentOne wrong paragraph, one right one. Side by side.7. The acceptance testParaphrase testing, five readers, before publishing.The difference between a guide that is used and one that is filedOne ends in a check somebody can run. The other ends in adjectives every competitor also claims.
Seven components, each of which a writer can act on without interpretation, ending in a test rather than an aspiration. Source : Method, over the Federal Plain Language Guidelines (2026)

What to do with this

Take the last thing you published and run one pass: convert passive constructions to active with the actor named, split every sentence carrying two ideas, and check that “you” is defined somewhere on the page. That pass alone does most of what a voice guide is meant to do.

Then run a paraphrase test on the paragraph that matters most, with five people who are not in marketing. The sentence they cannot say back is the sentence to rewrite, and it is almost never the one you expected.

If anything you publish carries a claim that needs qualifying, treat the disclosure as regulated writing rather than fine print: near the claim, prominent, unavoidable, and phrased so the intended audience understands it without effort.

And when you write the guide itself, put the five hard moments in it. A voice outlives the person who wrote it only when it is documented with the rest of the brand, which is why we treat tone of voice and messaging as part of the brand platform rather than a late addition to the guidelines. The related brand decisions are covered in brand color and what the research shows and naming a B2B brand and clearing it.